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You’ve pierced my heart and left me to die
I sit all alone and wonder why
It’s hard to go on without a heart
It was your razorblade words that tore it apart
Scribbling down sentences to describe how I feel
Nothing I write can feel this real
The mirror reflects a pain that will never fade
I’m trapped in a mess that I’ve made
Duct taping broken pieces that fit into place
Mascara running down my face
At a frantic pace my fingers missed
A lose piece fell and slit my wrist
Just enough to see a peek of red
The way this night ended I’d rather be dead
©2004-2009 ~AkikoWeasley
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Submitted: December 16, 2004
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It’s not a piece about suicide. It’s just about a sad girl.
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Great imagery and flow.

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Screw Jello....There's always room for Hagandaas!!!
I love this, its great, gotta fave xxx

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If today was perfect, then there would be no need for tomorrow

:hug:

xxx † Syre † xxx

The Original ValoRose

Ryan Ottley is my hero

Life is not measured in the breaths you take, but the moments that take your breath away
Ohhh thankies :hug: I haven't heard from ya in a while u ok?
i'm good.. A little stressed lol, but good nonetheless

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If today was perfect, then there would be no need for tomorrow

:hug:

xxx † Syre † xxx

The Original ValoRose

Ryan Ottley is my hero

Life is not measured in the breaths you take, but the moments that take your breath away
Tis the season for stress and mental breakdowns. ^_^ But I'm glad to hear that your doing good.
thanx, hope ur doin good too

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If today was perfect, then there would be no need for tomorrow

:hug:

xxx † Syre † xxx

The Original ValoRose

Ryan Ottley is my hero

Life is not measured in the breaths you take, but the moments that take your breath away
I love the way this all links together, very nice to read, good rhythm! :)

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~~ Just one look into your eyes, one look and I'm crying cause you're so beautiful ~~
I love it! It flows really well and has lots of emotion in it!

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