Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


You’ve pierced my heart and left me to die
I sit all alone and wonder why
It’s hard to go on without a heart
It was your razorblade words that tore it apart
Scribbling down sentences to describe how I feel
Nothing I write can feel this real
The mirror reflects a pain that will never fade
I’m trapped in a mess that I’ve made
Duct taping broken pieces that fit into place
Mascara running down my face
At a frantic pace my fingers missed
A lose piece fell and slit my wrist
Just enough to see a peek of red
The way this night ended I’d rather be dead
©2004-2009 ~AkikoWeasley
:iconakikoweasley:

Author's Comments

It’s not a piece about suicide. It’s just about a sad girl.

Comments


:iconleliz:
Great imagery and flow.

--
Screw Jello....There's always room for Hagandaas!!!
:iconvilles-syre:
I love this, its great, gotta fave xxx

--
If today was perfect, then there would be no need for tomorrow

:hug:

xxx † Syre † xxx

The Original ValoRose

Ryan Ottley is my hero

Life is not measured in the breaths you take, but the moments that take your breath away
:iconakikoweasley:
Ohhh thankies :hug: I haven't heard from ya in a while u ok?
:iconvilles-syre:
i'm good.. A little stressed lol, but good nonetheless

--
If today was perfect, then there would be no need for tomorrow

:hug:

xxx † Syre † xxx

The Original ValoRose

Ryan Ottley is my hero

Life is not measured in the breaths you take, but the moments that take your breath away
:iconakikoweasley:
Tis the season for stress and mental breakdowns. ^_^ But I'm glad to hear that your doing good.
:iconvilles-syre:
thanx, hope ur doin good too

--
If today was perfect, then there would be no need for tomorrow

:hug:

xxx † Syre † xxx

The Original ValoRose

Ryan Ottley is my hero

Life is not measured in the breaths you take, but the moments that take your breath away
:icon6join6me6:
I love the way this all links together, very nice to read, good rhythm! :)

--
~~ Just one look into your eyes, one look and I'm crying cause you're so beautiful ~~
:iconpink-poppy:
I love it! It flows really well and has lots of emotion in it!

--
~*Pink Poppy*~

(\ /)
(O.o)
(><;)
/_l_\
copy bunny into sig to help him achieve world domination

(\ /)
( . .)
c('')('')
CUtE BuNNy!

Details

December 16, 2004
717 bytes

Statistics

114
181 [who?]
5,262 (2 today)
158 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map